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Personally I'm quite disturbed by how dark these stories turned out to be that it put me off writing for a while.
It was long established between me and SecretSwitch that I was better at writing horror stories and majority of the time my ideas would freak her out and to be honest, when I read them back they do some freakishly scary and creepy.
Anyways, depending how it goes, this story might be removed/taken down.
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Interesting, this is even darker than your last dark story. I think that you shouldn't put it down though. That would be a shame and waste.
ReplyDeletePS: I hoped that there would be one "good" fate instead of all the sad ones.
I do like the occasional dark story... this one was too dark for me. I wouldn't scrap it, as each story an author creates is a testimony about the author, but if your dis-satisfied with it create something else until your satisfied or your dis-satisfaction ceases. Cool Idea I do like the premise, but it got to dark for me.
ReplyDeleteIt was too dark for me as well... which put me off
DeleteWell, Im glad to see you back. I look forward to what you create next.... though I hope its lighter ;)
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